You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Give details of your study plans Explain why you want to get a part-time job Suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Hansa As I told you

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summer I am planning to take a

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in your country and I have been selected by the University of BC for one year

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so I am soon going to be there. The

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I am taking is a full-time

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in brand marketing which consists of 2 semesters of 4 months each and 2 months break followed by each semester. As you already know Canada is a very expensive country compared to mine, I was hoping to do a part-time job after my classes to meet my living expenses and it will

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help me to gain some work experience in the new country. Since it's your hometown, it would be very helpful to me if you could recommend some places where I can work. It would be best if you can help me find something that aligns with my area of study so I can implement my knowledge into the real world. See you soon! Yours sincerely Hannah

Submitted by hansa.pandit11 on Sun Jun 05 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

168 words

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Educational aspirations
Work experience
Financial independence
Resume (or CV)
Local job market
International student
Legal requirements
Student work permit
Employment trends
Time management
Networking
A part-time position
Balance studies and work
Job hunting strategies

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