You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Give details of your study plans Explain why you want to get a part-time job Suggest how your friend could help you find a job

#country #study #job #friend #lives #help #plans

Dear Hansa As I told you

last

summer I am planning to take a

course

in your country and I have been selected by the University of BC for one year

course

so I am soon going to be there. The

course

I am taking is a full-time

course

in brand marketing which consists of 2 semesters of 4 months each and 2 months break followed by each semester. As you already know Canada is a very expensive country compared to mine, I was hoping to do a part-time job after my classes to meet my living expenses and it will

also

help me to gain some work experience in the new country. Since it's your hometown, it would be very helpful to me if you could recommend some places where I can work. It would be best if you can help me find something that aligns with my area of study so I can implement my knowledge into the real world. See you soon! Yours sincerely Hannah

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Educational aspirations
Work experience
Financial independence
Resume (or CV)
Local job market
International student
Legal requirements
Student work permit
Employment trends
Time management
Networking
A part-time position
Balance studies and work
Job hunting strategies

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