Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?

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Jobs

plays

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play

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a crucial role in everyone's life . Some

jobs

are quite easy and some are very difficult . But here I would like to discuss the

differentiate

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from

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between

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male

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males

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and

female

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females

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according to their job rules I strongly agree with the

above given

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statement . To commence with, In

this

contemporary

era

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everyone is doing job in different kinds of field .

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Men's

Mens

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Men

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are doing duties in the engineering stream whilst

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women

women's

womens

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women

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did

jobs

teaching

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the teaching

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field . Both genders have equally

being

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divided

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their own sectors.

Firstly

, if we talk about many

jobs

are

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being done by females very accurately like in the cosmetic company . They handled each and every customer very gently and keep the

things

in mind from where I can take

and

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them and

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from where

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can be kept .

Secondly

, In the fields of

eletrical

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electrical

industries here males

are experienced

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have experienced

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this

job in a

finely

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manner because they have a vast knowledge about electrical wires and rods .

For instance

, we cannot tell the females to climb up the electrical poles for checking the wires where there will be any kind of

powecut

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powercut

power cut

so, in

this

case

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men's

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men

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can do better in

this

field . To sum up , according to me everyone can do difficult

things

and can be overcome

with

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apply

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the given duties allocated to individuals

however

, we are not taking some

things

very

easily

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for difficult tasks . Both men and women are having their own power for doing their own

things

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

254 words

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Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Many people believe that using a bicycle as your main form of transport has a lot of advantages whereas others think that it has many disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today. Why is this? is this a positive or a negative development?

Every culture, throughout time, has recorded its history in one way or another. in what ways can history be passed on to the next generation? why is history important to society?