The government is spending a lot of money to discover life in other planets, some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing problems of public. To what extent you agree?
Many
people
believe that a huge amount of expenditure is being used in search of life Use synonyms
in
other planets whereas, others claim that governing bodies should utilize Change preposition
on
this
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money
for solving Use synonyms
citizens
problems. Change noun form
citizens'
citizen's
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, I completely agree with the notion that authorities should spend more Linking Words
for
the welfare of Change preposition
on
its
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their
people
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instead
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this
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research
.
Nowadays, many nations are providing huge funds for the Use synonyms
research
of life on other planets. Many scientists are looking for the availability of water and oxygen Use synonyms
on
the various parts of the globe. Change preposition
in
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instance
many countries Add a comma
,instance
such
as USA and China have launched many spaceships on Linking Words
the
Mars, in search that if Correct article usage
apply
survival
of humans is possible outside the earth. Add an article
the survival
However
, still the results and data obtained are not significant and do not reflect any positive signs. Linking Words
Therefore
, if Linking Words
this
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money
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is spend
on the public needs it would be more fruitful.
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is spent
On the other hand
, there are Linking Words
lot
of requirements of the citizens Change the article
a lot
such
as healthcare facilities, good transportation, daily needs and better salaries. Linking Words
Instead
of wasting Linking Words
money
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in
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such
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researches
, it should be utilized for serving the Fix the agreement mistake
research
people
of Use synonyms
nation
. One of the best examples of Add an article
the nation
a nation
this
can be seen in Korea where Linking Words
government
has raised the public funding Add an article
the government
and and
is using Correct word choice
apply
this
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money
for the construction of advanced hospitals in the rural areas so that its individuals can be benefitted. Henceforth, authorities should spend the resources on the essential things which are required for the prosperity of the country.
To conclude, authorities should spend on the Use synonyms
research
work and discoveries but only Use synonyms
for
those which have definite results and which are beneficial for Change preposition
on
the nations growth
. Change to a genitive case
the growth of the nation
the nation's growth
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, I firmly believe that Linking Words
huge
amount should not be used on unnecessary Correct article usage
a huge
research
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instead
it should be used for the welfare of the Linking Words
people
.Use synonyms
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