The government is spending a lot of money to discover life in other planets, some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing problems of public. To what extent you agree?

Many

people

believe that a huge amount of expenditure is being used in search of life

in

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other planets whereas, others claim that governing bodies should utilize

this

money

for solving

citizens

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problems.

However

, I completely agree with the notion that authorities should spend more

for

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the welfare of

its

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people

instead

of

this

kind of

research

. Nowadays, many nations are providing huge funds for the

research

of life on other planets. Many scientists are looking for the availability of water and oxygen

on

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the various parts of the globe.

For

instance

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many countries

such

as USA and China have launched many spaceships on

the

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Mars, in search that if

survival

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the survival

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of humans is possible outside the earth.

However

, still the results and data obtained are not significant and do not reflect any positive signs.

Therefore

, if

this

money

is spend

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on the public needs it would be more fruitful.

On the other hand

, there are

lot

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of requirements of the citizens

such

as healthcare facilities, good transportation, daily needs and better salaries.

Instead

of wasting

money

in

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such

kind of

researches

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, it should be utilized for serving the

people

of

nation

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the nation

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. One of the best examples of

this

can be seen in Korea where

government

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has raised the public funding

and and

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is using

this

money

for the construction of advanced hospitals in the rural areas so that its individuals can be benefitted. Henceforth, authorities should spend the resources on the essential things which are required for the prosperity of the country. To conclude, authorities should spend on the

research

work and discoveries but only

for

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those which have definite results and which are beneficial for

the nations growth

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the growth of the nation

the nation's growth

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.

Therefore

, I firmly believe that

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amount should not be used on unnecessary

research

instead

it should be used for the welfare of the

people

.