Some people think that excessive use of smartphones badly affects teenagers' literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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teenagers
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and foremost reason behind
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the
teenagers
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life
.
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explain
, some people think that
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smartphones
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are
teenagers
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for playing
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games
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and watching the pictures
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government in the 2020
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in smartphones to
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regularly
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crime in our
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teenagers
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stems from the fact
teenagers
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technology in our
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to do anything crime and
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smartphones
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using
internet
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the internet
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threw
teenagers
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anything
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any thing
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anything
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because anyone
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not stop and see
you
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mobile phone.
Moreover
,
teenagers
try to search
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and
other
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side
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such
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in
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the internet.
Thus
, it is
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effect on
teenagers
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future
life
and carries are don't well. To conclude,
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teenagers
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bad
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way to crime in
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society and people are effect yet
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are do not achieve by
teenagers
.
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