You recently went on a trip and thought that the tour guide was particularly helpful. Now you would like to show him/ her your appreciation. Write a letter to the manager of the tour company. In your letter describe the tour explain why you liked the tour guide say what you would like the manager to do to reward the tour guide

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing
this
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letter to inform you regarding a
tour
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guide
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. I recently went to
shimla
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Shimla
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in
himachal
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for 7
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stay there . And it is
very
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beautiful trip and never seen
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kind of
place
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my
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in my
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life. It is many
i
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was going there because I have donot knowledge about
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then
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I recommend
tour
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guide
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in your company.
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, the trip is very beautiful and know about
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a different
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place
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in my country because the trip
guide
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thy have
lot
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knowledge about
place
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and hotel in
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place
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I really enjoy
this
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tour
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.
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,
i
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am very happy and I will do to reward
in
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apply
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your
tour
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guide
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because they have
very
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better way and
i
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was see
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all the
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place
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very cheap way and go
one
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from one
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place
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to
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way by train and
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is very cheap I really like
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person
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I decide to do something
tour
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guide
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. I hope will read my letter and know about
this
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person.
Thankyou
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, You Sincerely , Dharma
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