Some people think that excessive use of smartphones badly affects teenagers' literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,Some people think that excessive
use
of smartphones badly affects teenagers' literacy skills, with the advancement of technology, we will witness many teenagers prefer to
use
mobile phones for a long time
also
I think so
this
topic will be detrimental for them, especially on their literacy skills,
this
essay will check
this
matter.  
Firstly
, these days we can see a lot of children that tend to
use
the smartphone for different reasons and
this
is lead to them wanting to waste their time,
furthermore
, they do not have enough time for literacy skills
also
this
has become a disaster and parents can not overcome to
this
issue,
however
,
use
of
this
device can help them in several problems but they should be limited
use
of
this
device unless they have a problem that will solve by the cellphone, of course, as we can see using of
this
device grow up than before because as we can see many classes held through online by cellphone,
for example
, in the Corona period many of youths have to
use
of the mobile phone for their class and
this
can boost
this
happens and their family should interfere to
this
matter and noticed them and there is much software
that is
useful for them.
secondly
,
in addition
, excessive
use
of these facilities can suffer us a wide range of diseases that can be with us throughout our life,
thus
, we can
use
them in the form of harmless which means that we can
use
them with a clear schedule and we should keep themselves healthy,
for instance
, if we need to
use
them it is better we
use
them for training rather than playing games or browsing on different the websites. In conclusion, we should learn to our children to
use
the proper different devices and we can advise them for using them in order to learn school courses and other entertainments will die out their age.
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