You received a letter from a friend who asked for a recommendation letter from you for the job that he/she is applying for. Write a letter to the manager: – Explain how well you know this person – Describe how this person work – Why you think this person is suitable for the job.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Kristy Smith. I am writing you

this

letter to recommend Ms

Areeza

Shah for the position of Internation travel manager.

Areeza

Correct your spelling

Ariza

and I were working together for a well-established travel agency. She joined my team as an intern for the summer internship. She is extremely good at team-building, time management and leadership.

Besides

, she always offers creative ideas.

Hence

, immediately after her internship, She was been offered a full-time job. She has helped our company to take the

level. In fact, She has received three promotions during her five years of career span. Since

Areeza

is now moving to her home country, She is looking for a new job opportunity. In my opinion,

Areeza

will be a good asset to the company and I am sure she will help your agency to take the

level with her creative ideas. I hope you will accept

this

recommendation letter. Yours faithfully, KG

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

159 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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