Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that governing bodies should provide more expenditure for the enhancement of

railways

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instead

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of

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. I firmly believe

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that increased capital should be utilized for the

railways

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as it is more convenient and

ecofriendly

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.

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with, the authorities should emphasise

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the construction of

railways

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rather than

roads

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because

railways

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are more

enviroment

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environment

friendly,

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contributing to less air pollution.

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hand

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investing in

roads

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will

consequently

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lead to

increased

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an increased

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number of private vehicles,

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polluting the nature.

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, with the introduction of the Metro in Delhi which is a railway based

transportation

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system, it has been found that nowadays commuters prefer to travel by metro and the studies

illustrates

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that

pollution

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the pollution

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rate in the city has been significantly declined due to

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fast track

transportation

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system. The other reason behind

this

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is that

railways

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are more convenient,

time saving

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and affordable as compared to other modes of road

transportation

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.

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, if

increased

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the increased

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number of commuters will travel by

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railways

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railway

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than

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then

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one of the major

issue

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issues

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of

the

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traffic jams can be mitigated. One of the best examples, of

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this

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can be seen in Japan where people choose to travel by trains as according to them they find it

time saving

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and cheaper and pertaining to

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there has been a gradual decline in traffic jams on the

roads

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after

introduction

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of more subways. To conclude,

roads

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are the major mode of

transportation

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but enhancement in the

railways

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can be more beneficial with respect to the

enviroment

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environment

and public welfare.

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, I believe that funds should be raised by the authorities for development in the sector of the

railways

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so that its citizens can be benefitted.