Many young children have unsupervised accesss to the internet and are using the internet to socialise with others. This has can lead to a number of dangerous situations which cab be threatening for children. What problems do children face when going online without parental supervision? How can these problems be solved?

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, I do totally agree with the statement that uncontrolled
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to the internet for
children
could
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potentially
lead to danger. In my opinion, online trouble
children
faced mostly is cyberbullying, I had listened to one of the
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about a girl that had been bullied through the internet and ended up
herself
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commiting
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suicide. It was utterly tragic
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and hopefully doesn't happen more from now on.
Moreover
, some sensitive
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such
as
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, sex and addictions must be filtered closely from
children
since these things could usher kids to imitate these
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in real life. In order to prevent these issues, supervision is essential, especially by
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their
parents or teachers who could indicate and suggest
children
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about
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the contents they should and should not enjoy within their ages.
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, advising them
some
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knowledgable or creative
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to
children
in order to assist them to explore topics that they could
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be a fantastic solution as well.
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  • Finally
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Inappropriate content
  • Cyberbullying
  • Online predators
  • Internet addiction
  • Psychological impact
  • Grooming
  • Privacy invasion
  • Misinformation
  • Cognitive development
  • Oversharing
  • Peer pressure
  • Exploitation
  • Anonymity
  • Digital footprint
  • Parental controls
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