Write about the following topic. Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the past, abortion is considered
as
a sin, Change preposition
apply
comparing
to Wrong verb form
compared
kill
your own baby and do not even give them an opportunity to see the planet. But nowadays, some people started to change the way they think Wrong verb form
killing
into
abortion might be a choice to make if their kids would not be having a great life. Change preposition
about
However
, some still say it is against morality.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
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