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There is too much noise in many public places in cities. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve the problem?

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It can be observed in many common areas in the cities sound pollution has
incresed
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increased
 to a high level. Some of the root causes for
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the development
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 of townships and urbanization. As
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 is injurious to humans and nature, control measures should be taken to control sound levels by implementing sound control and implementing regulatory policies. Noise pollution has become one of the primary issues around the world. A key factor is the development
work
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take
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 place in cities, where various constructions are taken place. Due to the construction
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work
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 many workers are drawn
in to
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 the area and a variety of machines ,
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 as cement mixtures and trucks combine to complete the
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.
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 of high activity among man and
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 it can be observed that noise increases in public areas.
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Further more
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, people are drawn
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 the cities from rural areas
finding
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work
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 and business.
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 increases the human population in the towns and during the
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 these people get together in common places,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • noise pollution
  • urbanization
  • population density
  • traffic congestion
  • infrastructure development
  • public announcement systems
  • street performances
  • noise regulations
  • soundproof materials
  • public transportation
  • designated quiet zones
  • green spaces
  • buffer zones
  • public awareness
  • community efforts
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