Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult to live such as Sahara desert or Antarctica. Do advantages outweight the disadvantage of live there .

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smaller and smaller because of the advanced technology and transportation system, people have been visiting over any place around the world and even Sahara dessert and

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where extreme weather conditions and hostile

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make them so hard to live in but tourists around the world who like challengings are coming more and more year after year. I personally think

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and cons of

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that cannot

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even imagined. Due to the abnormal conditions of

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normal ones that can see

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in our daily life and very interesting.

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and cultures of the natives are worth noting.

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because of the unique and extraordinary environments and

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. Turning to the disadvantages, it is obvious that people with low resistance will not likely

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travel to those

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in the sense that their surroundings are rough and harsh, and sudden

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can lead them to

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diseases and illnesses.

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persons, there are so many difficulties waiting for them to overcome.

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, it may be easy to travel to those

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but it would be really difficult to travel from one place to another in those

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and foods and drinks are really scarce and will need to bring as much as that can be carried. In a nutshell, I pen down saying that

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the experiences and

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that will

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are promising to beat the vast amounts of obstacles.