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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try an improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

#people #situation #job #shortage #money #improve #situations
Money
playa
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plays
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 a vital role in everyone's
life
. Without money
life
 is nothing and we cannot meet our necessities .Many folks think that it is
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better to do receive poor
issue
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issues
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such
 as doing
part time
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part-time
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job
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jobs
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 which
pay
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 less for the
job
 . Some individuals debate that
this
 is
the
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good to prove
such
kind
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kinds
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 of issues very seriously. To commence with, In
this
 contemporary
era
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 everyone has overcome
with
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the
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bad or good situations . Situations have different needs and expectations.
Firstly
, problems
varies
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 in different factors
such
 as low paid jobs, less
income based
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income-based
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 businesses and so on. The folks who do not have any
kind
 of income source in their family that
person's
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people
person
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 are ready to take part in any
kind
 of
job
 whether it is well paid or it is less paid
job
 because they
seems
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seem
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 to be in a very bad
finanacial
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financial
 issues .
for instance
, many
belives
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believes
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 that
while
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sitting free at home is
a
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 best way to do
job
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a job
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 for spending time
in
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at
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 work and feel energetic .
Secondly
, we should improve
this
 by various methods like doing our own
busines
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business
 so that we can satisfy
with
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our requirements rather than facing bad time in our
life
 .
However
, we can
also
 go for enjoyment in hill stations,
amusement
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and amusement
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 parks
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so that
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that
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where
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 our mind gets relaxed and get rid
out from
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of
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 depression while thinking
these
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this kind
these kinds
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kind
 of things . To sum up , it is undeniable that both
the
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views are equally accepted because problems arise from our birth and never
stops
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stop
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to
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until to
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 end of our death . So according to my perspective, the best method is to
taccle
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tackle
 with each and everything in
a
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an
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 accurate manner
an
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and
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 lived a happy
life
 as
life
 is an ongoing process.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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