Some people think that excessive use of smartphones badly affects teenagers' literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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highly controversial during
this
contemporary era especially now that technology is trending.Some individuals
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of the opinion that overutilization of phones incorrectly is detrimental to young
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literacy
skills.I completely agree that they can be a dangerous distraction and affect
communication
.
Firstly
,the
iphone
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iPhone
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greatly known to cause a great deal of dangerous distraction to the children as they are not well informed on what is appropriate to help them in academic.
In addition
,
this
technology makes youths have contradicting information on what they learn in schools
such
that their
literacy
competence is affected.
Moreover
,their
communication
which is imperative in learning these skills is affected since they use incomplete words when texting.
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research done by the University of Nairobi depicts that
literacy
skills have dropped by 50% compared with previous years.
Therefore
,youths should be controlled when using handsets as they contain offensive content
Secondly
,
the
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mobile phones are the most popular gadget in the world even albeit kids are
inadequatly
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inadequately
adequately
utilizing the phone,
communication
has been revolutionalized.
Moreover
,they can read and write wherever they are
such
that there are applications that can award marks on what they have written and give them corrections as well as access journals to read.
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research done by the Kenyatta university indicates that 70% of youth have improved on
literacy
due to the use of
this
technology.
Therefore
,teens can utilize phones for their own benefits as they can help improve
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their academic performance and socially. To sum up,the young person can be a drawback with the mobile phone
such
that if not utilized well can affect their future
communication
.
However
,there is an added advantage for those who utilize them.
Submitted by Sabina Hamisi on

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