Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There has been a difference of opinion regarding the responsibility of

environment

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protection. There is a view that it is the government’s obligation and others think that each of the citizens has to work for its protection. From my perspective, both of those opinions are equally important.

Firstly

, the nation is always responsible to maintain the ecosystem because it has the right to formulate the constitution that everyone has to follow.

For example

, the state has the right to punish anyone who does illegal actions

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the surrounding

environment

such

as cutting trees, hunting animals, littering, etc.

Secondly

, the government has financial resources to invest in modern methods, machinery and equipment

such

as water purification technology, renovate contaminated land or produce more products including food,

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appliances that are more environmentally friendly.

Last

but not least, they can

also

call for help from international friends and encourage people to contribute to environmental protection. Maintaining and protecting the

environment

is a big issue that

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the world, so

in addition

to the government of the countries, it is

also

the duty of each citizen. Start with leading an eco-friendly lifestyle:

reduce

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plastic use, do not littering, sorting properly, and

use

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public transport…

Furthermore

, people can propaganda and

raising

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public awareness of the environmental problems through campaigns or boycott companies that have

detrimental

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impact

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on the

environment

. These actions seem very small, but meaningful and effective in reducing harm to the

environment

, saving thousands of lives, creating jobs and helping so many people around the world. In conclusion, protecting and maintaining the

environment

should be the responsibility and obligation of everyone including the government and every individual.