In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that
in
Correct your spelling
an
institution
called marriage Add an article
an institution
the institution
both
the husband and wife should earn and contribute Use synonyms
for
attaining a good family Change preposition
to
life
. I completely agree with Use synonyms
this
notion as due to increased expenditures and high living standards nowadays, couples should share equal responsibilities for running a family.
In Linking Words
this
modern world, due to Linking Words
Correct article usage
a hike
hike
in prices in each and every Fix the agreement mistake
hikes
sector
it is not practically possible to run a family Add a comma
,sector
single handed
. Due to Add a hyphen
single-handed
fall
in Correct article usage
the fall
economy
in various Add an article
the economy
an economy
countries
everything is affected which has Add a comma
,countries
subsequently
Linking Words
lead
to more rise in expenditure as compared to previous years. Wrong verb form
led
For instance
, in a recent study conducted in India, Linking Words
majority
of the ladies in the citiesCorrect article usage
the majority
as well as countryside
Add the comma(s)
, as well as countryside area,
area
are working for providing better living for their families and Fix the agreement mistake
areas
this
data of earning women is double in comparison to the figures from the past years. Linking Words
Therefore
, Linking Words
both
the spouses should earn, so that their Use synonyms
life
could be balanced and Use synonyms
they
do not suffer from Correct pronoun usage
apply
economic
crisis.
Add an article
the economic
an economic
On the other hand
, if Linking Words
both
the partners will work and earn they can Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
manage
mange
to have high living standards and they can provide all the amenities to their families. Correct your spelling
manage
For example
, nowadays in most of the countries Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
USA
, Korea and Correct article usage
the USA
UK
, there has been a substantial rise in the Correct article usage
the UK
tution
fee in most of the Correct your spelling
tuition
top rated
institutions and with the earnings of Add a hyphen
top-rated
single
Add an article
a single
individual
it is not possible to provide admissions in high rated schools and universities. Add a comma
,individual
However
, with the combined efforts and earnings of Linking Words
both
the Use synonyms
spouses
it is possible Add a comma
,spouses
forthem
to provide Correct your spelling
for them
good
Add an article
a good
life
and good Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
education
eduction
to their children.
To conclude, in marriage if a couple earns together and Correct your spelling
education
distribute
all responsibilities equally including the financial sharing, it will definitely contribute to Correct subject-verb agreement
distributes
better
future. Correct article usage
a better
Hence
, I firmly believe that Linking Words
both
the partners should earn so that they can have Use synonyms
prosperous
family Add an article
a prosperous
life
.Use synonyms
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