In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that
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institution
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an institution
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called marriage
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the husband and wife should earn and contribute
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attaining a good family
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. I completely agree with
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notion as due to increased expenditures and high living standards nowadays, couples should share equal responsibilities for running a family. In
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modern world, due to
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hike
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in prices in each and every
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it is not practically possible to run a family
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. Due to
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in
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the economy
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in various
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everything is affected which has
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lead
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to more rise in expenditure as compared to previous years.
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, in a recent study conducted in India,
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of the ladies in the cities
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area
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are working for providing better living for their families and
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data of earning women is double in comparison to the figures from the past years.
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,
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the spouses should earn, so that their
life
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could be balanced and
they
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do not suffer from
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the economic
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crisis.
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, if
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the partners will work and earn they can
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manage
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mange
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to have high living standards and they can provide all the amenities to their families.
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, nowadays in most of the countries
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as
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, Korea and
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the UK
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, there has been a substantial rise in the
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tuition
fee in most of the
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institutions and with the earnings of
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individual
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it is not possible to provide admissions in high rated schools and universities.
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, with the combined efforts and earnings of
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the
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it is possible
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for them
to provide
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life
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and good
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eduction
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to their children. To conclude, in marriage if a couple earns together and
distribute
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distributes
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all responsibilities equally including the financial sharing, it will definitely contribute to
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future.
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, I firmly believe that
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the partners should earn so that they can have
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a prosperous
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family
life
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.
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