Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages, schools should not force them to learn foreign languages.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is debatable that
schools
should not include a
second
language
in their compulsory curriculum since it is challenging for
students
to learn foreign
languages
. Some feel that forcing incapable
students
to learn foreign
languages
cause demotivating them and putting them in
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. In my opinion, considering the positive effects
such
as educating open-minded perspectives and job opportunities in the future, all
students
should be taught a
second
language
at
schools
.
To begin
with, as
language
is intimately related to culture, foreign
language
education
is not just
language
education
, but
also
cultural
education
. To be specific, young children can broaden their horizons by experiencing the way people from other countries think and knowledge of other cultures through learning foreign
languages
. One study,
for example
, shows
students
who have experienced foreign
languages
tend to understand other cultures and have open attitudes.
This
demonstrates how important learning different
languages
are for a student despite
of
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their
language
learning capacity.
In addition
, if
schools
do not enforce
language
education
just because of
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of children’s learning ability, young people who are not affordable to be educated privately have fewer chances to get promising jobs after graduation. It is obviously true that in modern society, more and more companies are looking for
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applicants who completed foreign
language
courses. According to a recent survey conducted in Korea, most companies consider the completion of foreign
language
education
as a requirement for employment. In
this
regard, all
students
should learn foreign
languages
at
schools
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to have fair opportunities
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market after graduation. In conclusion, despite the compulsory
education
may cause
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to children who
are
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lack
of
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learning ability, foreign
language
education
should be designated as a mandatory subject so that
students
can broaden their perspective on the world and have promising jobs in the future.
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