Some people believe that non academic subjects should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate only on academics. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays there is increasing pressure on juveniles to have grand success in education, keeping
this
in mind, some people think of cancelling the extracurricular activities. The main reason for thinking of
this
is so that pupils could concentrate on educational content
such
as maths and science. In my opinion, I did not agree with
this
notion and I will explain my reason in the following paragraph. It is a fact that if the academic score is poor, there is a high chance of staying unemployed unless one really has a good family business.
This
is the main reason for
parents
to think on academic scores are excellent.
Furthermore
,
parents
also
think that non-educational topics
such
as sports and cookery skills are unnecessary tests and give points to
students
.
For example
, in my school, the P.E. class was forced every student to play a sport different for each grade as commanded by the education ministry. So, there are various
students
and
parents
who think that why P.E. class must have a grade because the purposes of the subject want
students
to have healthy bodies. Some
students
lose average grade points because of failed physical exams which make them stressed.
On the contrary
, if any student exceeds the expectations in cooking or sports, that can be a great opportunity to take part in the Olympics or to become a chef as a career. Topmost achievers in
such
non-academics do earn a lot of money and become famous.
Although
such
chances are rare, one is still should encourage to be part of physical activities to have a healthy mind and body. I have seen examples of academic toppers who are having health challenges
such
as often approaching hospitals and being under medications. To sum up, there should be consideration of physical activities and vocational subjects apart from academics, so that
students
will stay healthy and wise.
Parents
should not avoid
such
subjects because these subjects indirectly help in succeeding academically by having a healthy mind
as a result
of a healthy body.
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