Your next-door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter describe the situation explain the problems it is causing you offer at least one solution.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to make a complaint about the loud noise coming from neighbourhood flat at late night. I noticed that recently a young man moved
next
to my door and he conducted late-night parties with loud music which creates our sleep disruption. The situation is getting worse day by day due to lack of sleep and causing
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my children got feared due to loud bass sounds coming from his flat in the middle of the night.
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, it is impossible to have a continuous rest after tiring work at the office and the following day ended up in sleep disorder. I would like to suggest a preferable solution by putting a ban on all sound systems after 9pm.
This
will allow the tenants to act
accordingly
to the building rules and allow others in a good sleep mentality. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully James Joseph.
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