Your next-door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter describe the situation explain the problems it is causing you offer at least one solution.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to make a complaint about the loud noise coming from neighbourhood flat at late night. I noticed that recently a young man moved

to my door and he conducted late-night parties with loud music which creates our sleep disruption. The situation is getting worse day by day due to lack of sleep and causing

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my children got feared due to loud bass sounds coming from his flat in the middle of the night.

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, it is impossible to have a continuous rest after tiring work at the office and the following day ended up in sleep disorder. I would like to suggest a preferable solution by putting a ban on all sound systems after 9pm.

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will allow the tenants to act

accordingly

to the building rules and allow others in a good sleep mentality. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully James Joseph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

159 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Nowadays, there is trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it iss harmfull to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?