Some people think that food is one of the most fundamental economic products and should be mostly produced by each country for its own consumption, with only minimal export of products to other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
A growing number of
people
believe that basic necessities, such
as food are one of the most fundamental economic products
and should be mostly produced by each country for its own consumption, with only minimal export
of products
to other countries
. I completely disagree with this
view because it would lead to lower state revenue and present less experience
to taste
a myriad of dishes from other countries
.
Firstly
, Minimizing the export
of basic products
will decrease significantly economic growth in the state. Especially, in Agriculture countries
such
as Thailand, Laos and Cambodia. By and large, export
is considered the most common intervention made by the government in collecting income, which is vital to fund the public's needs. If the government does not have a vision for exporting products
. They will suffer from an administrative country. All people
will suffer from economic problems.
Another noticeable reason why I believe limiting export
activities is not a good option is that it would make people
have less experience
to taste
a countless number of special foods across the world. It is often said that by marketing domestic products
to international buyers, people
could consume a plethora of unique dishes from other countries
. Take ramen as an example. Obviously, by selling this
dish outside Japan, people
could taste
its’ unique textures, spices and herbs, which cannot be found in their home countries
. Consequently
, people
would have more experience
in tasting international cuisines.
To sum up, in my view, reducing global trade on basic needs could significantly reduce the state revenue and present less global cuisine experience
. Unless the government creates a balance between domestic consumption and export
activities, it is unlikely to provide proper public facilities and allow local citizens to experience
a novel taste
of food.Submitted by first.kantapat on
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