Some people say that advertising is extremely successfull at persuading us to buy things. other peoplr think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion
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Although
we are constantly inundated with too much
adverts everywhere and have become aware that they push the products that we don’t actually need, they are still very powerful and achieving in engaging with customers.
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many
People
are pretty ad-averse now than they ever have been. Because the repeated commercials on TV programs as well as the steady increase of online ads
appearing across our favorite
websites and social networks is certainly a grievance of consumers. Those overloaded information cause frustration and desensitization and as a consequence, Change the spelling
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people
tune them out entirely. As an example, every time I watch YouTube videos, irrelevant ads
appear frequently which makes me feel irritating
and skip them quickly without hesitation. Replace the word
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Moreover
, society has been realizing that adverts are not only badgering us to make unnecessary purchases but also
they cannot be trustable because sometimes, the quality of the goods in reality
is not as good as they advertise. Add the comma(s)
, in reality,
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why people
are no longer interested in them.
On the other hand
, ads
are still constantly evolving and increasing consumer engagement. In fact, effective advertising techniques can always reach out to the targeted customers. For instance
, toothpaste commercials like Colgate often use dentists to proof
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as a result
, majority
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Furthermore
, despite the fact that repeated ads
are quite annoying, repetition means the message can be communicated effectively because psychologically, the things we see or hear frequently are subconsciously remaining in our mind
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fruit juice, we would be more likely to pick up the brand which is already in our mind.
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although
adverts are quite intrusive and we are constantly bombarded with advertising messages, they continue achieving in persuading
the crowd and gaining their trust by using various approaches. In my opinion, the population would be fascinated and wouldn’t neglect Wrong verb form
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ads
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