Some people say that advertising is extremely successfull at persuading us to buy things. other peoplr think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Advertisements are both persuasive and invasive at the same time. Some
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argue that advertisements have
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influence on
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to make choices of the products while others say that they have become
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commonplace and are getting ignored.
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we are constantly inundated with too
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adverts everywhere and have become aware that they push the products that we don’t actually need, they are still very powerful and achieving in engaging with customers.
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are pretty ad-averse now than they ever have been. Because the repeated commercials on TV programs as well as the steady increase of online
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appearing across our
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websites and social networks is certainly a grievance of consumers. Those overloaded information cause frustration and desensitization and as a consequence,
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tune them out entirely. As an example, every time I watch YouTube videos, irrelevant
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appear frequently which makes me feel
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and skip them quickly without hesitation.
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, society has been realizing that adverts are not only badgering us to make unnecessary purchases but
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they cannot be trustable because sometimes, the quality of the goods
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is not as good as they advertise.
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why
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are no longer interested in them.
On the other hand
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,
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are still constantly evolving and increasing consumer engagement. In fact, effective advertising techniques can always reach out to the targeted customers.
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, toothpaste commercials like Colgate often use dentists to
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that their brand is recommended by experts which helps it to stand out among
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of other different ones and
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,
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of customers would choose Colgate believing it’s better than others.
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, despite the fact that repeated
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are quite annoying, repetition means the message can be communicated effectively because psychologically, the things we see or hear frequently are subconsciously remaining in our
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for a long time. Suppose that when we are in the supermarket to buy
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fruit juice, we would be more likely to pick up the brand which is already in our mind. In conclusion,
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adverts are quite intrusive and we are constantly bombarded with advertising messages, they continue achieving in
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the crowd and gaining their trust by using various approaches. In my opinion, the population would be fascinated and wouldn’t neglect
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if they provide relevant
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as well as the right messages to different groups of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumer behavior
  • Marketing strategies
  • Brand awareness
  • Psychological impact
  • Target audience
  • Commercialization
  • Sensory overload
  • Selective perception
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Ad fatigue
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