In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work, and accommodate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development.
Internet
play a vital role in today's world . Technology
has becoming
advanced in many fields like Wrong verb form
become
for
shopping , doing business and finding a place to live through Change preposition
apply
internet
as compared to Correct article usage
the internet
in person
meetings. I think Add a hyphen
in-person
advantages
overweight the disadvantages.
To commence with , In Correct article usage
the advantages
this
contemporary world
everyone is Add a comma
,world
techno savvy
, these days because Add a hyphen
techno-savvy
the
way Change preposition
of the
the
Correct article usage
apply
advance
Replace the word
advanced
technology
transitions each and everything . Firstly
, It makes individuals
life Change noun form
individuals'
individual's
more
easier for doing Change the word
apply
difficult
Add an article
the difficult
task
while sitting at home. we can buy groceries,Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
clothes
, Correct word choice
and clothes
finding
Wrong verb form
find
house
for Add an article
a house
a
rent and Remove the article
apply
did
so many household chores with the help of surfing Wrong verb form
do
internet
on mobile phones . Add an article
the internet
However
, on the other
hand
it is not good at all because we lack the habit of doing social interactions with our relatives, friends and families. Add a comma
,hand
Secondly
, people used to do
talk ,Unnecessary verb
apply
chat
on Correct word choice
and chat
internet
without going to meet them in person at their home. Add an article
the internet
For example
, when there was a fully imposed lockdowns
in the whole world due to Fix the agreement mistake
lockdown
coronovirus
folks were fully tired Correct your spelling
coronavirus
for
using Change preposition
of
internet
Correct article usage
the internet
whole
day at home and they did not meet anyone at that time . Correct article usage
the whole
Furthermore
, if technology
is not developed then
each and every person becaomes
independent for their own work rather than advanced Correct your spelling
becomes
technology
. It does not makes
us healthy and wealthy. Change the verb form
make
childerns
, Correct your spelling
children
adolescents
forget all of their physical activities due to the bad impact of Correct word choice
and adolescents
this
new weapon .
To sum up , it is undeniable that modern technology
makes the modern era more complicated rather than using own imagination . Advantages
outweighed the disadvantages due to many reasons . I think Correct article usage
The advantages
this
problem should be overcome by various circumstances .Submitted by deepikahanda8349 on
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