The governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often argued that qualified

governments

put more effort

to

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assisting the poorer

countries

. I completely agree with

this

statement and I think that

governments

which are rich should allocate the budget to help other ones.

This

essay will put some reasons to expand my point of view.

First

of all, one of the most reasons why I believe that

governments

of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations is that all people deserve the get high life standards.

In other words

, In some

countries

in particular

in Africa, people cope with

starving

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and lack of water

source

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. If richer

governments

will not provide these or make a way to

produce

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, it would be a life-threatening issue.

Secondly

, It

is appear

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to me,

assisting

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that assisting

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poor

countries

contributes to

establish

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a

liveble

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livable

liveable

world as well.

For instance

, economic conditions put a strain on these

countries

.

Moreover

,

this

problem

lead

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to war possibility. Authorities spent

vast

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majority of

budget

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to

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defense

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their

countries

.

In according

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to

news

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I have read recently,

defence

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sector

make

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up

the

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apply

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50%

expenditure

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of expenditure

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of African

countries

.

Therefore

, getting

assist

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from rich

countries

alleviate

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this

strain and provide

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peaceful

peacefull

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atmosphere. In conclusion, there has been a dilemma whether rich

countries

help the poorer ones or not. I am of the opinion that rich

countries

definitely should allocate the budget to help other needed

countries

.