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The plans blow show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The given two maps provide a plan
about
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 the improvement of the SouthWest Airport in the future. Overall, it is plain to see that there are several differences between
two
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 graphs.
First
off
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 all, The number of boarding gas will be extended by 10, from 8 to 18.
In addition
, The original walking we will be replaced by the subway.
Second
, the door of departure and arrival will be
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 double.
Third
, there will add more facilities for tourists.
In
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 the arrival launch, the café, ATM and car hire will be constructed.
Additionally
, in the departure lounge, the original check-in counter will be replaced by the bag drop space, and be removed to the new corner across from the lounge.
Also
, the café will be removed to a space beside the departure gate.
Finally
, the shops will be added between the security and the boarding gates. To sum up, these new facilities enhance the quality for passengers and the
tourtists
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tourists
 can be more convenient.
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