Write a letter of complaint to a company outlining a problem you had while visiting one of their stores. In your letter include: what the problem was why this problem has upset you what you want to happen as a result of your letter

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to express some concerns regarding my recent visit to one of your stores located near the Sherbrook metro station. My intention was to pick out a new laptop but everything went awry.
First
, I was having a hard time looking for a consultant, seems like everybody disappeared. After several attempts at capturing someone's
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I
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managed to find a worked. As far as I remember, his name was Jack. I asked him to help me choose a laptop of a particular configuration and he recommended a few models. I was so delighted that there was exactly what I needed,
that is
why I did not double-check the computer, paid for it and left the shop. But when I got home, I found out that the processor in my laptop was a completely different one. I understand that it was partially my mistake, I should have checked it before paying. On the flip side, I clearly described my requirements to Jack and he did a poor job helping me. I had to spend some extra time returning the machine. I would be grateful if you speak with your employee and
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him how it is important to be focused while working with the customers. If you had any other questions related to
this
accident, please feel free to contact me on my phone (4383416040). Yours faithfully, Artem.
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