Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
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To begin
with, one of the important advantage
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advantages
in
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their own premises.
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On the other hand
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to learn about various cultures and traditions . Add a missing verb
are unable
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, they do not have a chance to get jobs and other great opportunities wherever only they are willing to live in their comfort zone. For instance
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