The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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some one

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that increasing the rate of internet shopping in urban areas in the future

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to closure retain and whole stores. I beg to differ with

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opinion in

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essay , and I will state the reasons for my view. Basically, shopping online offers

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great flexibility and more convenience for customers .

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is because they could stay at home and buy their needs comfortable,

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they do not spend so much time in traffic for buying basic substances,

such

as groceries , clothes and food.

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, some people and I have faith

visiting

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local stores is

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way and shops would have existed . the reason why ,

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they can see the goods and check

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quality .the pictures used to advertise online are

some times

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unreal and the reality of the products is different from being shown. Due to the fact that the images are usually taken with

high quality

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cameras.

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instance

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my wife bought a light blue

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as my

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gift when we delivered its

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.

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not truth the website and social media ,due to the

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that the number of

advertisement

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are fake and to fishing. they deceive their victim by attractive

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and

circumstance

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to buy. I had

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experience

last

year, I decide to purchase a cellphone from Digi

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my account bank was hacked by clicking its sending link. I would like to close

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argument,

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visual shopping are

ease

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to

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a consumer

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consumer

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consumers

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who prefer

stay

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at home and order their needs, some people and I believe that in buying must control the size,

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and

another items

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also

in shopping online may be your secret date be

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. I recommended both service shops have

exist

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to people with distinction views.