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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

#growth #shops #towns #cities
It is argued by
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some one
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someone
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 that increasing the rate of internet shopping in urban areas in the future
causes
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 to closure retain and whole stores. I beg to differ with
this
 opinion in
this
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a
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great flexibility and more convenience for customers .
this
 is because they could stay at home and buy their needs comfortable,
as a
result
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 they do not spend so much time in traffic for buying basic substances,
such
 as groceries , clothes and food.
However
, some people and I have faith
visiting
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 local stores is
better
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 way and shops would have existed . the reason why ,
to begin
with
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 they can see the goods and check
its
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 quality .the pictures used to advertise online are
some times
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 unreal and the reality of the products is different from being shown. Due to the fact that the images are usually taken with
high quality
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cameras.
For
instance
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 my wife bought a light blue
short
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shorts
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 as my
birthday ‘s
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 gift when we delivered its
color
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 was
distinction
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 with
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.
In addition
, some human race
do
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 not truth the website and social media ,due to the
owing
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 that the number of
advertisement
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advertisements
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 are fake and to fishing. they deceive their victim by attractive
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 and
circumstance
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 to buy. I had
personal
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a personal
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 experience
last
 year, I decide to purchase a cellphone from Digi
kala
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 my account bank was hacked by clicking its sending link. I would like to close
this
 argument,
although
 visual shopping are
ease
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to
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a consumer
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consumer
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consumers
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 who prefer
stay
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 at home and order their needs, some people and I believe that in buying must control the size,
color
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 and
another items
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also
 in shopping online may be your secret date be
hack
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. I recommended both service shops have
exist
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 to people with distinction views.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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