The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by
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someone
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someone
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better
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they can see the goods and check Add the comma(s)
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its
quality .the pictures used to advertise online are Correct pronoun usage
their
some times
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sometimes
high quality
cameras. Add a hyphen
high-quality
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my wife bought a light blue Add a comma
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consumers
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