You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
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Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing
this
in regards to the advertisement in the ‘’Kids love’ magazine data October 26 . I would like to join your family to look after your child.
I would like mention
that not only I would like to care Fix the infinitive
to mention
babies
, but Change preposition
for babies
also
I have got my master ‘s science in child nursing for 3 years. I would like to work in the
field that Correct article usage
a
related
Add a missing verb
is related
with
my major.
I have been working Change preposition
to
Change preposition
in as
as
kids Correct your spelling
a
caring
in Wrong verb form
care
nursery
school for 10 years. Correct article usage
a nursery
also
I have Add a comma
,also
experience
Change the article
the experience
to teach
Change the verb form
teaching
the
children who are stressed from going to Correct article usage
apply
community
. I think I can help Add an article
the community
to
your child ready Change preposition
apply
to
school.
I am going Change preposition
for
improve
my knowledge about the diseases minors ,Fix the infinitive
to improve
thus
I need a laptop which connected
to Add a missing verb
is connected
internet
in my leisure time. When I was in your home.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Add an article
the internet
kamran
Change the capitalization
Kamran
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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