Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing
this
in regards to the advertisement in the ‘’Kids love’ magazine data October 26 . I would like to join your family to look after your child.
I would like Linking Words
mention
that not only I would like to care Fix the infinitive
to mention
babies
, but Change preposition
for babies
also
I have got my master ‘s science in child nursing for 3 years. I would like to work in Linking Words
the
field that Correct article usage
a
related
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is related
with
my major.
I have been working Change preposition
to
Change preposition
in as
as
kids Correct your spelling
a
caring
in Wrong verb form
care
nursery
school for 10 years. Correct article usage
a nursery
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also
I have Add a comma
,also
experience
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the experience
to teach
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teaching
the
children who are stressed from going to Correct article usage
apply
community
. I think I can help Add an article
the community
to
your child ready Change preposition
apply
to
school.
I am going Change preposition
for
improve
my knowledge about the diseases minors ,Fix the infinitive
to improve
thus
I need a laptop which Linking Words
connected
to Add a missing verb
is connected
internet
in my leisure time. When I was in your home.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Add an article
the internet
kamran
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Kamran
k.seydi