With the development of social media , more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations . What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem ?

Due to the development of social media,

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number of youngsters

are

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able to use the internet to interact with their friends online without

supervised

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.

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situation may cause some dangerous things. About

this

, I propose some suggestions to

prevent

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. The result of

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problems is that

children

may become victims of criminal activities

,

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because young people are really innocent, they may be

mislead

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and utilized by some criminals, and

then

they may do some things that they don’t understand and participate in some dangerous things,

such

as illegal sexual activity, drugs and violence. In

this

process,

children

may be threatened and intimidated,

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will cause

harms

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to their physical and mental health. So, some measures are needed to prevent

this

problem,

First

, parents should increase their

vigilant

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about their

children

's online communicative activities. They can limit the websites and the time that

children

can surf. Parents

also

can encourage

children

to go out and do

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activities outdoor that

children

are interested

.

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Not only they can make friends in real life but

also

reduces the time that they spend

on

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chatting and meeting online. And it will bring some benefits

for

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children

’s physical health.

Then

, because

children

have less experience and lack awareness of social security on

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the network

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network

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networks

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, the government and schools can often hold

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lectures and knowledge contests about social security on

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the network

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network

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, and they can invite students to participate, and the winners can gain rewards. In

this

process, the

children

not only can receive rewards, but

also

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can gain some knowledge of social safety online.

Finally

, social networking sites should

should

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be stratified by age and divide the community. And the identity information of users is strictly checked and certified to prevent criminals that can enter platforms. And it will make the network environment

more

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cleaner. In conclusion, if

social

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pay

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more attention

on

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children

using social networks, I

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believe

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belive

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these suggestions can reduce the online crimes happening.