With the development of social media , more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations . What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem ?
Due to the development of social media,
the
number of youngsters Correct article usage
a
are
able to use the internet to interact with their friends online without Change the verb form
is
supervised
. Replace the word
supervision
This
situation may cause some dangerous things. About this
, I propose some suggestions to prevent
.
The result of Correct pronoun usage
itprevent
this
problems is that Correct determiner usage
these
children
may become victims of criminal activities,
because young people are really innocent, they may be Remove the comma
apply
mislead
and utilized by some criminals, and Wrong verb form
misled
then
they may do some things that they don’t understand and participate in some dangerous things, such
as illegal sexual activity, drugs and violence. In this
process, children
may be threatened and intimidated, that
will cause Correct pronoun usage
which
harms
to their physical and mental health.
So, some measures are needed to prevent Fix the agreement mistake
harm
this
problem, First
, parents should increase their vigilant
about their Replace the word
vigilance
children
's online communicative activities. They can limit the websites and the time that children
can surf. Parents also
can encourage children
to go out and do some
activities outdoor that Correct quantifier usage
apply
children
are interested.
Not only they can make friends in real life but Change preposition
in.
also
reduces the time that they spend on
chatting and meeting online. And it will bring some benefits Change preposition
apply
for
Change preposition
to
children
’s physical health.
Then
, because children
have less experience and lack awareness of social security on Add an article
the network
network
, the government and schools can often hold Fix the agreement mistake
networks
some
lectures and knowledge contests about social security on Correct quantifier usage
apply
Add an article
the network
network
, and they can invite students to participate, and the winners can gain rewards. In Fix the agreement mistake
networks
this
process, the children
not only can receive rewards, but also
they
can gain some knowledge of social safety online.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Finally
, social networking sites should should
be stratified by age and divide the community. And the identity information of users is strictly checked and certified to prevent criminals that can enter platforms. And it will make the network environment Remove the redundancy
apply
more
cleaner.
In conclusion, if Correct quantifier usage
apply
social
Replace the word
society
pay
more attention Correct subject-verb agreement
pays
on
Change the preposition
to
children
using social networks, I Correct your spelling
believe
belive
these suggestions can reduce the online crimes happening.Correct your spelling
believe
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