A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter tell your friend about the job and what sort of working involves. say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her. Explain how to apply for the job.

Dear Ramtin, Hi, How are you? What's up? I hope everything is fine. I'm writing

this

letter because

last

day I found out that our local company need some accounting, and you told me you've been looking for a new opportunity, so I thought

that is

a dream job for you. I remember we studied accounting at university together and always you were a top student in all of the courses and now you have a master's degree in accounting.

Also

, you have good business sense and good communication skills. absolutely, I remember you learnt everything very fast.

Moreover

, Persian is your mother-tough but you can speak English and France very frequently. I recommended you make a strong resume and sent it to me. After that, I print it and send it to our local company. I know you have a high chance to get

this

job. If there are any questions, please call me. Lots of love, Mozhde Zand.

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