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Some people think that real life skills like cooking, housekeeping and gardening should be included in the curriculum as compulsory subjects? Do you agree or disagree? Explain your opinion, using specific reasons and details.

In our modern society, pupils learn various
subjects
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 for their future
life
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, they study languages, science and music.
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, recently some citizens believe that
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students
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life
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skills
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 like cooking, housekeeping and gardening as compulsory
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. I agreed with
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 statement since
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life
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sikils
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skills
skill
 are vital for our
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skills
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 is more important for
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especially
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young
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generaton
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generation
. 70 years ago when our grandparents worked, all
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 did not need to learn
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skills
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 because the majority of men worked outside and only women did housekeeping,
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 women had enough time to learn
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 things.
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, nowadays a large number of
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 live alone since dozens of women have started work and become independent compared to before.
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,
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 makes clear that students should learn
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skills
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 as
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compulsory
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 for living better by themselves.
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 to that, getting
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life
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skills
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 can increase the level of
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satisfaction
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A recent
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 research conducted by the Japanese government has reported that
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 who learned
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life
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skills
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 answered a 30
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 higher score than their
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 for the question
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“Do you satisfy with your daily
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?”. One of the famous researchers called
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 Yoshi in Tokyo university analysed that citizens with good
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life
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skills
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 feel less stress and can live healthy because they are good at these
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 thanks to the curriculum.
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, it becomes apparent that it is a wonderful idea that pupils
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real
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skills
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. To sum up, learning
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life
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skills
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 is more important compared to
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before
 with the high percentage of
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 who living alone, as well as it makes our health condition better with less stress.
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, I agreed with the opinion that
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life
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skills
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 should be included in the curriculum as compulsory
subjects
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. After a thorough analysis of
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 subject, it is predicted that the number of schools which teach
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skills
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 children will be increased significantly in
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 few decades.

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