Seint Naychi Oo: Do you believe that professional athletes make good role models for young people? Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge-edge or experience. Koko : bby

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I believe that the young can choose

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athlete as their idol.in

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am going to support my opinion. I think when a young person wants to take someone as his/her role model it is necessary to consider many criteria

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persistant

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,care about the aim that they have,

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their dreams and fight for their porpuses and the athletes have most of

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options so they can be a hero for youths.another thing that

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want to mention is that the attitude and the

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which the sportsman has,is so considerate and they are aware of their

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and their manner towards people and even with their competitors

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they have sportsmanship which is crucial for the society and for the fans. athletes are not only so powerful but

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so genuine at the same time and that makes them reliable and it contributes to building a trustworthy relationship between young people and these athletes. in ,conclusion the sportsman can exemplify a good idol for

adolescent

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in order to lack selfishness and

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a man of honour,so it makes parents happy

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if their child could be like an athlete.