Writing task 1: Write atleast 150 words and spend no more than 20 minutes on this task. You are new to the city and you would like to take your family out for a meal. Write a letter to your friend who is familiar with the city. In your letter: • Tell him or her about the occasion • Tell him or her about what kind of a restaurant you prefer • Ask him suitable recommendations Start with Dear..............,

#atleast #minutes #city #friend #occasion #restaurant #recommendations

Dear Ravi, How are you? Hope

this

letter finds you well and I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I move to Vancouver along with my family. I am planning for a dinner

party

outside to celebrate my 30th birthday and as you know I am very new to

this

place and still searching for the best place. It`s been a long time since we did not have a

party

outside of the home and we decided to have a lavish

party

in one of the best places. We are especially looking for some of the best vegan food restaurants and

also

it should be very near to home as we do not have any car. If possible we are ready to have an advance booking to avoid rust at the reception. Despite high prices and items, we are more worried about the hygiene of the location. I knew that you are the right person to suggest to me the best hotel in Vancouver and please feel to drop your notes as soon as possible. If possible please send the hotel contact and their reviews as well.

Nevertheless

,You are most welcome to join our family

party

and I cannot wait anymore to have a great

party

. I look forward to hearing your suggestion and hope I will get it soon. Best regards, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Thu Jun 09 2022

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

227 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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