People nowadays tend to take their family to another country when they work abroad. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

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number of
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in
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the country
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country
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countries
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concerned
towards
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their education and career immigrate
to
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abroad
for
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search
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the search
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of
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life. As
people
settle, they prefer to take their family with them due to various reasons. The forthcoming paragraph
examin
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examine
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merits and demerits of it. On the
one
hand, once
individual
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an individual
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is settled in another
country
and their earnings can afford the living cost of their family, they take them with
themselves
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. Without a doubt, nothing is
important
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in
this
world than loved
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. Taking care of their basic need becomes the
first
priority. From my personal experience, staying away from them makes life more difficult than anyone could ever imagine.
Additionally
, emotional support
people
get from their close
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plays
vital
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role in
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of any individual. Most importantly the
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availability
becomes easy for elder
people
in case of
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emergency.
On the other hand
,
such
immigrations cost a lot to
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the economy
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of
country
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the country
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. To illustrate, most
of
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the
people
when
move
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from
one
location to another location they plan to stay there for
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and their generations as well.
As a result
,
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of losing the best
talant
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talent
becomes high.
For instance
,
greatest
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talent
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talents
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like Sundar Pichai and Sataya
Nandela
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Mandela
, both are from India,
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for United State as a CEO of big companies. If they would have worked for Indian companies, India would have made a huge dent on the global level. In conclusion,
country
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the country
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should create numerous opportunities so that the
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mindset
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mind set
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mindset
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of
people
about moving abroad could change.
However
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disadvantages would always be bigger than
advanatges
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advantages
.
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