Some people think that using animals for experimentation purpose is cruel, but other people think that is necessary for the development of science. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Nowadays, medical science is improving day by day. A number of people believe that usage of
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a small number of people think that for the improvement of science
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should be done on
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personally believe that
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experiments
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should not be done on
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because they
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to live and enjoy their life with family, and doing
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may cost the
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, it is almost impossible to survive for incapable
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which leads to unnecessary loss of
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tested on
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eyes which leaves some of them blind .
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blind
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cannot survive in their natural habitats, and they are left to die.
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, a number of people believe that doing
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necessary for the growth of science. At
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, it is considered that human
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are much more precious than
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animals
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human beings should not be used for
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experiments
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because of human rights laws.
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,
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are used in
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for developing medicines .
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, at the time of
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of covid-19 vaccine the trials were done on
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of successful
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, vaccines got
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approval
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, humans should not be used for
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the experiment
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experiment
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so
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are used for
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trials .
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, they
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to live and enjoy their life with their families .
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, I believe that
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experiments
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must be avoided as far as possible.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Animal experimentation
  • Cruelty
  • Ethical dilemmas
  • Medical breakthroughs
  • In vivo testing
  • In vitro testing
  • Bioethics
  • Alternative methods
  • Regulatory oversight
  • Vivisection
  • Animal welfare
  • Pharmacological research
  • Toxicology
  • Clinical trials
  • Moral imperatives
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