Research has shown that spending less time in the office can reduce the use of energy (for example, electricity, gas). Thus some companies close for some days a week. Do this advantage of this development outhweight the disadvantage.

nowadays, by research about spending less time in

the

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work and office people can reduce the use of energy

as well as

into

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some

country

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cause expensive intensity price the managers prefer close to some days a week.In my opinion, it

has been

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a good idea if they

can

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improve work through the

internet

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. some people believe that spending less time in the office is better for them because they do not need to spend a lot of money on employee and energy

such

as water or gas or electricity and

this

topic help them to keep company and ,

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actually it has been benefits for employers ,especially by increase the rate of population growth and increase the price of power

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case they decision come less in the work in during the week they can develop industry themselves with the internet. other citizens believe that do not should decrease time trial for less use of efficiency and we can Reimburse costs by ,

for example

, more job and hard job or even by improving technology we can help to renewable power

such

as sun or waves or ocean or wind.

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, using renewable stamina

need

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to spend

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a lot of money to start and

also

needs Conditions but I think it

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a perfect idea to keep active works and inhabitants and

also

society. In conclusion, I have been working in a well-noun factory and I do not like

clouse

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close

our factory during the week so I suggest , the government should help to keep jobs

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for example

office

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offices

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or

factory

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by developing renewable technology and

give

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facilities

as well as

decrease

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rate efficiency price and

in addition

to

this

In my view, the power must develop of peoples culture for saving and using adequate spirit we can solve

this

problem.