Write a letter to a friend who worked at your previous company. You have moved to a new job in a new city. • describe your city • describe your job • describe the arrangements for him to visit you Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Champak, Hope

this

letter finds you in a pink of health. I am writing to tell you about my new job location and position. After my selection

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a soft company in

Mumbai

as a developer.

Last

month, I shifted to

Mumbai

along with my family. Since

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I was little engaged to set myself in the new culture and environment.

Hence

, I could not talk to you. I am sincerely apologizing for it.

First

and foremost, the working hours here are so flexible that you can start your work even in the evening providing 8 hours of work to be completed as per company norms. The team with which I am working are so co-operative and helpful.

Moreover

, I would like to tell you about

Mumbai

city. As you are aware that

Mumbai

is a city of various heritage places, food and fun. I would like you to visit

Mumbai

month. Please do not bother about the accommodation. You will stay with us only. I humbly request you to plan your trip and let me know your arrival date in

Mumbai

. Look forward to seeing you soon Best regards, Krunal Gandhi

Submitted by Krishna.gandhi on Thu Jun 09 2022

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8 paragraphs

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8.00

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Write a letter to a friend who worked at your previous company. You have moved to a new job in a new city. • describe your city • describe your job • describe the arrangements for him to visit you Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

some people say that in all levels of education from primary schools to universities, too much time is spend on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.

The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

Success is often measured in term of how much money someone has earned. Do you think wealth is a good measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successful or not?

Modern cultures around the world have become similar when compared to the past. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

You are working overseas in an international company. You are leaving the country in emergency. Write a letter to your friend. Apologies for leaving like this. Explain what happened. Tell them what you are going to miss about working with them.