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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months • say how your work could be done while you are away • ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Sammy, I am writing
this
 letter regarding apply the technician occupy at the head office in India. As a new clerk in our company, I still learn more skills from my supervisor, and I know we have more professional experts in the head office, from whom I can learn excellent knowledge. I know you are always busy in our company,
that is
 why I have handed over my job to my tutor Daniel, who is a loyal and diligent worker you can trust. That job includes a program of wifi net building up on the
third
 floor and an internet bridge between room2, room4, and room 6. I think it is easy to Daniel to work out. As a new man in our company, and I never went to the head office before, so could you give me much advice that I can follow up,
such
 as what need I bring with me, or which internet sector I need to review more before I go, etc. Best Regards, Yours Sincerely Cole Chen
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional advancement
  • cross-cultural collaboration
  • headquarters/ head office
  • global perspective
  • remote work
  • temporary assignment
  • team dynamics
  • networking opportunities
  • cultural immersion
  • succession planning
  • collaborative tools
  • time zone coordination
  • corporate hierarchy
  • relocation logistics
  • work-life balance
  • multinational environment
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