As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Businesses have a huge role they pray in the

community

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such

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that apart from making

profit

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,they

also

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have

public

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responsibility.In my opinion,

i

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full

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agree with the statement that business has to attend to social needs in the

community

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and paying of taxes which support the

government

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in building the

society

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.

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,

projects

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are part-and-parcel of

community

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activity as they help in discovering talents through

involvement

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of games and show solidarity with the member of the

society

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,

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this

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a

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way of building confidentiality with the

society

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and strengthening

security

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the security

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of the business where they

also

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utilize that opportunity to advertise for their products which increase their sales .

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,Kenyatta University host

largest

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Africa

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African

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games in the year 2022.

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,businesses are

such

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an

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apply

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imperative

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projects

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project

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in the

community

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because

society

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look

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up

into

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them for growth apart from making money.

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,businesses pay taxes

hence

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making

profit

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is indispensable as the

government

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has a policy for entrepreneurs that they have a cut

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submitted to the

government

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.

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,

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this

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collected taxes facilitate

in

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apply

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bulding

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building

the

society

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.

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,infrastructure and water

projects

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has

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currently been implemented in the villages through

member

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a member

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of parliament.

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,institutions must make

profit

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because they have a role to meet the need of the

society

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and for the purposes of the growth of the

projects

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itself

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and survival. To sum up,

corporation

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the corporation

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has a duty

towards

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toward

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the

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society

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not only

making

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money but

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helping

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members of

the

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society

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discover talents through social activities.Notwithstanding, they support the

government

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through collected tax from entrepreneurs