In the running days, some people believe that traveling under the supervision of tour guide is the best approach as compared to going alone for tourorism. I partially agree with this point of view as traveling in a group with an expert and going alone has its own pros and cons.

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a number of persons are of the perception that going on a visit to places of interest requires guidance from a superior
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of the event and others do not see the need for a supervisor. I totally agree
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the fact that having a tour guide can help
one
to get all the necessary information as
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to the visited places and
also
help the individuals not to get lost in the process. Oftentimes, people look for
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ways to unwind especially when the week has been very stressful due to work activities, certain areas of interest would be the best option to relax
as a result
environments
such
as
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and
art
galleries can be
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best option. These
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are accessible to the public and most often guided by people to help orientate the visitors in order to understand why some
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were made and
also
their historical background. At the end of it all, pictures, movies or
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would not just be viewed but every knowledge attached to its discovery would be revealed and comprehended. To illustrate, a significant amount of citizens and
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visit the museum every week to learn about contemporary and indigenous
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works and it is very understood through the help of a tour guide.
In addition
, the
art
venues are always very big with complicated
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of which if
one
goes into it there is a high possibility that
such
person will miss track of his or her
way
. In as much as most of the
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we pass through each and every day have confusing
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and in
one
way
or the other we have been able to locate our
way
back does not give
one
the guarantee that in places like the
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back would be very easy. It is most likely to be very frustrating and
therefore
there is a need for a tour guide to ease away
such
stress. To exemplify, a newspaper called the daily times reported
last
week about a woman who got lost in a museum in Lagos state and was locked in it because no
one
noticed early that she was still inside the vicinity, if not for the security man who overheard her crying for help who knows what would have happened to her. In
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sense, it is necessary to have a supervisor when moving
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an unfamiliar place. In conclusion, authority
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especially in an organization for a reason and so it should be overlooked as it might have detrimental consequences. To prevent
this
, humans are
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in charge
in order to give the necessary details about the environment of visit and
also
prevent patronizers from missing their routes

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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