Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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ancient time. From that time to now,
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individuals are more likely to live with their peers. Some people might be thinking
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have the same opinions as them. Others should prefer to concentrate
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different ideas in order to create an inclusive world.
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both views and
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sense of friendship and
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, it is easier to put your ideas up. Sometimes when it is knowing
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of argument and just agree
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the other
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it is good to have people around you that disagree with your
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. As long as we live in a place with different
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experience
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, uniques cultures and big
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it desirable to build up
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with different opinions.
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money issues ther other colleagues can recommend a range of solutions to solve the problem. In the same way, in
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is better to have many opinions in order to achieve
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and creative path to join. To summarize, having
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opinion as
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friends is easier to deal with,
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encourages people to master
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in
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effectivity way.
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my point of
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diversity just can be
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with different ways to think.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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