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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is widely discussed whether
music
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 could serve as a tool that could attract
people
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 from various countries and
age
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 groups. In my opinion, I partly agree with the idea that
music
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 is a way to gather
people
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 who are from different backgrounds. It is accepted that
music
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 plays a considerable part in cultural communication.
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 of the advancement of technology,
people
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 can listen to all kinds of
music
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 which they are fond of.
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, the Internet, computer, smartphone and other electronic products provide convenient access to individuals by which
people
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 are available to be exposed to all ranges of
music
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. In
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 case,
people
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 with the same preference tend to share
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 mutual habit, regardless of culture or nationality.
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,
people
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 come to a
music
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 festival to enjoy the listening feast, though they might have different hobbies and attitudes when it comes to other fields.
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 the beauty of cultural communication.
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,
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 of different ages are not likely to share the same kinds of
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.
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 is because individuals’ preference of the type of
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 mostly depends on their taste when they were at a young
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.
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, the popularity of
music
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 styles has changed a lot through the decades, which means that the youth and the elders would not experience the same
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 type.
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 why it is difficult for musicians to come up with a song which is welcomed among all
age
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 groups. In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that
music
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 plays a role in attracting
people
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 from all ways to walk to some certain extent. But it could not perfectly perform
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 function when
people
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 are from a wide range of
age
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 groups.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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