Q: In many situations, people who break the law should be warned instead of punished. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some would argue that law-breakers ought to be warned rather than punished. I personally believe that strict sanction still has benefits for

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essay before the conclusion is reached.

To begin

with, it might seem reasonable for some individuals to believe that some criminals who commit negligible crimes should be warned

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because everybody deserves a

second

chance. Some offenders might offence the rule as they do not consider it thoroughly regarding the consequence of their action.

For instance

, countless younger that commit some minor guilts

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as stealing or punching

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their friends, should have done those actions because of without any villainous intention.

Then

,

this

is the reason why some people want to give them a chance.

However

, it is undeniable that the effective solution to solving

crime

problems is deterrence. I strongly believe that who have made either minor

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or serious

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should be justified and

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receive

a punishment by law.

In Addition

, the

crime

rate will increase if perpetrators knew that they will just

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without severe sanctions, they would do more guilts in future.

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, an adequate penalty,

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only the best way to give

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offenders, but

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give justice

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their victims as well. To summarize,

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criminals should be warned in order to probably turn to the right patch, appropriate

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sanctions

for those who commit crimes

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role for

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the

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citizen

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as well.