Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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lead
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people
closer together while other are
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the availability
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This
essay will discuss both side
of the argument and provide evidence as to why the invention of digital connectivity is superior.
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,the
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indoor
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indoors
internet
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today's
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born in a contemporary era of technology and Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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introduction of the Correct article usage
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smartphone
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smartphone
For example
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platforms
such
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Secondly
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are purchasing items online at
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in
confort
of their home Correct your spelling
comfort
such
that they do not feel the need to step out to purchase their regular item which make
them more isolated.Change the verb form
makes
Therefore
,the benefit of internet
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the internet
outweigh
the drawbacks.
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outweighs
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the internet
revolutionilized
the way we communicate since we can stay connected with family,friends and colleagues wherever they are.Correct your spelling
revolutionized
revolutionalized
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,people
can keep intouch
through several media Correct your spelling
in touch
such
as emails,zoom and video calls.Furthermore
,people
are able to save money and fuel by doing purchase
and studying online.Fix the agreement mistake
purchases
For example
,families meeting are being held online through video, which is becoming common for
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apply
Therefore
,this
advancment
has made Correct your spelling
advancement
people
feel more connected than before.
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on why
network
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in
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of Correct article usage
the use
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the online
platform
and it should not prevent Fix the agreement mistake
platforms
the
society from meeting friends and Correct article usage
apply
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physically.Fix the agreement mistake
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