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In some countries, small town-center shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

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In modern countries, small businesses including small shops are mostly settling in
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suburbs
 wich
this
 cause citizens opt to drive more
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distances
distance
 for visiting
this
 shops and buying the things they need.
consequensly
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consequently
,
this
 could lead to traffic and crowdy
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atmosphere
 of
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little
 towns too. I think even though
this
 change could help
to
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the growth of little towns but overall
this
 change does more harm than good. On the one hand, when
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 of
people
are
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 travelling long distances only
in
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 the purpose of shipping they may get tired of
this
 mostly
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long distance
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 drive. As a
reasult
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result
, their
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temper
tempest
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 and mood could suffer and
this
 could lead to verbal fights
wirh
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with
 sellers or other fellow
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customers
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.
furthermore
, the increasing number of road accidents
are
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 a major problem for countries. Travelling to another city only
in
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 the purpose of shopping could be turned
to
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 a
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hazard
 activity as
people
 may have road accidents which could create many other unnecessary problems.
Additionally
, the trend toward sopping in large stores located far away from
cities
 could cause a negative impact on
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. increase in travelling to these shops will encourage others to take
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a taxi
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 and reach to
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the destination
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 even
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of
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 they do not own a car.
Also
, Traffic congestion could be problematic if many tend to use their private cars to
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 long distances.
Which
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 means more
people
 will suffer from
time wasting
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 and staying in traffic.
However
, the change of
people
 shopping
preferance
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preference
preferences
 may encourage them to move to
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suburbs
 and live outside of
cities
. Given the fact that modern
cities
 are faced with overpopulation and
consequently
 ever-growing progress
on
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 supplying places for
this
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 stores,
people
 may consider the option of moving from
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cities
 more than ever. In conclusion, the trend toward shopping from distance shopping
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 may cause some advantages but I
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doubt
 that the trend could promise any significant outcome.
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