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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people aroung the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

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 in technology and negative effects
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 the environment
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 affected the agricultural lands adversely. The upgrading made in agriculture is not helpful because most
people
 are not aware
about
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 it and
this
 is the reason
farmers
 sleep hungry on global
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. They don’t earn what they deserve. I will elaborate
my
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 opinions below in
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Farmers
 are working hard by giving proper time and care to their fields for profitable yield.
People
 are unaware
about
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 the harmful effects of the increasing pollution and chemical use
to
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 the crops. The expenses and efforts they put on the field
is
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 not rewarding and
this
 is either less profitable or just equal
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 amount
that is
 spent. Sometimes, the market price is
also
 the reason that leads to loss because the value
that is
 polled is usually not acceptable, but they do not have a choice sometimes. There is one more thing
that
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accurate fertilizer use is less, and the same type of crop is grown every time that depreciates the quality of
soil
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the soil
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. Advancements in technology and science have brought up several methods and
machineries
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machinery
types of machinery
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 that not only save time but
also
 help in understanding the root cause of the improper yield. There are institutes that check the fertility of the
soil
 and help
farmers
 decide what crop is best to grow and will earn them profit. The fertility of the
soil
 decreases when the nutrients are used up by the crops. So,
farmers
 should grow different food in the same
soil
 to help
soil
 restore the lost nutrients from the previous plantation. To conclude, I would say many
people
 doing farming are familiar with these technologies and techniques that can do them a lot better. There must be seminars held to educate them about the processes, positive outcomes and the use. Nowadays, everyone has a smartphone and uses social sites, the video footage is another way to spread useful information among
the
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people
. Not only hard work but smart work is
also
 necessary for a better life.
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