In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people aroung the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

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in technology and negative effects

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the environment

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affected the agricultural lands adversely. The upgrading made in agriculture is not helpful because most

people

are not aware

about

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it and

this

is the reason

farmers

sleep hungry on global

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. They don’t earn what they deserve. I will elaborate

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opinions below in

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essay.

Farmers

are working hard by giving proper time and care to their fields for profitable yield.

People

are unaware

about

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the harmful effects of the increasing pollution and chemical use

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the crops. The expenses and efforts they put on the field

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not rewarding and

this

is either less profitable or just equal

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amount

that is

spent. Sometimes, the market price is

also

the reason that leads to loss because the value

that is

polled is usually not acceptable, but they do not have a choice sometimes. There is one more thing

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accurate fertilizer use is less, and the same type of crop is grown every time that depreciates the quality of

soil

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. Advancements in technology and science have brought up several methods and

machineries

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that not only save time but

also

help in understanding the root cause of the improper yield. There are institutes that check the fertility of the

soil

and help

farmers

decide what crop is best to grow and will earn them profit. The fertility of the

soil

decreases when the nutrients are used up by the crops. So,

farmers

should grow different food in the same

soil

to help

soil

restore the lost nutrients from the previous plantation. To conclude, I would say many

people

doing farming are familiar with these technologies and techniques that can do them a lot better. There must be seminars held to educate them about the processes, positive outcomes and the use. Nowadays, everyone has a smartphone and uses social sites, the video footage is another way to spread useful information among

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people

. Not only hard work but smart work is

also

necessary for a better life.