People think that countries should produce foods that their population eats and import less food as much as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Food
are
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sources
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of energy in human life.It
is play
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important role in
life
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cycle.Some
people
believe eats less
food
and
other
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belive
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that Country should produce refreshment that there population. I agree with
this
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phone more
and
shows
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my points in
further
paragraphs.
To begin
with,there are numerous reasons
firstly
,
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are many
people
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lives
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in
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country
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and farmers planted
food
for these
people
. Because meals are sources of energy in
human
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body.
for example
,
survay
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survey
surveys
conducted by BBC news
chanel
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channel
Chanel
it showed in 2018 shortage of
food
in upcoming period because the water level
are
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decreas
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decrease
decreasing
decreased
and it is
also
source
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of
food
.
Secondly
,
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population are completely
depending
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on
food
and water so government should be provided more facilities for landmark so they can
planting
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plant
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our crops and plants.
However
,some
people
believe they can eat less and
saving
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for
refreshment
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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