Write a letter to friend to inform them of a celebration you are having for a recent job promotion. Include information about The promotion The celebration Their accommodation

Dear John, I know you are waiting for an
occassion
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occasion
to
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catch up
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catchup
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with our friends. I found a reason to throw a party, I am promoted and my designation is
offically
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officially
changed. To explain
further
, recently my employer provided me
an
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opportunity to implement an application and I nailed it.
As a result
, my company has promoted me and my new job title is Lead application developer. To celebrate my milestone, I am hosting a party at
guest
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house in my hometown and inviting all our childhood friends. I have arranged the
food
for the whole and fun activities so be prepared to have
a lots
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a lot
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of
food
and refreshment. I hired a professional cook for barbeque and for cooking delicious
food
so that I can spend my whole day without bothering about the
food
.
Besides
above
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arrangements, accommodation is arranged in the Grand Hotel, which is 10 miles away from the venue;
Howerver
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However
, if you wish you can stay with my family as
you
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everyone is
familar
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familiar
with you and don't worry about the transport my local friends will
pickup
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pick up
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you from the airport and be with you till the
last
moment. Looking forward to
see
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you and
have
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having
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a
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countless memories. Your's lovingly, Rana
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