Write a letter to friend to inform them of a celebration you are having for a recent job promotion. Include information about The promotion The celebration Their accommodation

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Dear John, I know you are waiting for an

occassion

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occasion

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catch up

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catchup

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with our friends. I found a reason to throw a party, I am promoted and my designation is

offically

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officially

changed. To explain

further

, recently my employer provided me

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opportunity to implement an application and I nailed it.

As a result

, my company has promoted me and my new job title is Lead application developer. To celebrate my milestone, I am hosting a party at

guest

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house in my hometown and inviting all our childhood friends. I have arranged the

food

for the whole and fun activities so be prepared to have

a lots

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a lot

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food

and refreshment. I hired a professional cook for barbeque and for cooking delicious

food

so that I can spend my whole day without bothering about the

food

Besides

above

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arrangements, accommodation is arranged in the Grand Hotel, which is 10 miles away from the venue;

Howerver

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However

, if you wish you can stay with my family as

you

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everyone is

familar

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familiar

with you and don't worry about the transport my local friends will

pickup

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pick up

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you from the airport and be with you till the

last

moment. Looking forward to

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you and

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having

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countless memories. Your's lovingly, Rana

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

206 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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