Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sporting facilities. Others also say this would have a little effect on the public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is a certain school of thought that shares the sentiments that expanding the number of recreation

facilities

is the

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way to improve the public

health

of individuals while others are of the view that

this

would have minimal effects on individuals and

thus

strict measures are required.

This

shall entirely subscribe to the latter viewpoint

however

the two contradictory views shall be highlighted in the body paragraphs after which a logical conclusion shall be proposed. To embark upon, there are umpteenth reasons to bolster my opinion.

First

and foremost, the

cost

may deter people from accessing these

facilities

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, it is irrefutable that people in the middle class cannot access these

facilities

because of the high

cost

involved.

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those in the upper society who could benefit would not be able to because of their busy schedules and sometimes laziness. It is

therefore

an undeniable fact that increasing these

facilities

would not necessarily improve the

health

of members of the community. To buttress my point, in a survey conducted by the Ghana

health

service, about five more recreational services which were opened in June 2019 were not accessible as 10 people who signed in for

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gymnastics

to improve their

health

failed to show up due to their work schedules. Others lamented

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the high

cost

involved before accessing these leisure

facilities

On the flip side, I believe struct measures need

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be implemented to improve the

health

of members of the community. The government can

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a lot of

health

workers to give intensive education on radios,

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homes about the ramifications of

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diet and frequent

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at the hospital.

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the

cost

of these

facilities

should be reduced dramatically to be accessible to all. In conclusion, after assessing the two contrasting views, there is no doubt educating the individuals about the importance of keeping fit and healthy would go a long way than just the creation of these

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facilities

. I would

therefore

advocate

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government to create more mediums for members

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a community to keep fit.