Some people think we should stop building libraries because it is a waste of Government revenue. What extent do you agree or disagree

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number of individuals are of the opinion that Constructing Cybrain Services is an atrophy of the

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development in the body paragraphs after which a feasible conclusion shall be analysed. To commence, there are many umpteen to bolster my opinion.

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, constructing more libraries is worth considering as

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the education among

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populations in

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the community.

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is because a

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of younger can gain access to a

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of books for

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, research and for thorough study which will eventually broaden their horizons and increases their vocabulary.

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, in my trading college, the book house study was stocked with different kinds of magazines, journals,

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which helped us a

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throughout our 3 years

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in college.

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book added to our knowledge. Another factor worth considering

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a

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of these facilities would improve the reading habits of individuals.

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avid readers. Creating a

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of these facilities can

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of people to borrow books and read them in their homes.

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in Ghana, the president of Ghana constructed about 4 libraries for the people of Gomoa and research suggested that the libraries helped the younger and adults in the community to read more about the world and their

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improved as a consequence. In conclusion after accessing spurring education and improving the reading of members as the main reasons establishing library is not a

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away of Government revenue. I can strongly say without any doubt in my mind that the government should create more

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library facilities to enhance productivity.