Some people think we should stop building libraries because it is a waste of Government revenue. What extent do you agree or disagree

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the education among
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, research and for thorough study which will eventually broaden their horizons and increases their vocabulary.
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of people to borrow books and read them in their homes.
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in Ghana, the president of Ghana constructed about 4 libraries for the people of Gomoa and research suggested that the libraries helped the younger and adults in the community to read more about the world and their
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improved as a consequence. In conclusion after accessing spurring education and improving the reading of members as the main reasons establishing library is not a
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away of Government revenue. I can strongly say without any doubt in my mind that the government should create more
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library facilities to enhance productivity.

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